talibahTOR's finished assignments

[b]this is were you will post finished assignments and I will mark them

Assignment1: Adjust the following statements so that they meet the expected standard of slave speech.

she walked into the room and felt the eyes of the Free and slaves fall instantly upon her. the girl was terrified. she looked to Master Darius and then to Master Martoch. the slave felt reassured when i
she saw Him smile. He was the first One the kajira looked to, the first One she always look to. Then the girl saw the slave, christa, and she made a face that told this one she was feeling jealous and angry. So, the girl went and kneeled beside her, so that she would know she was her dear friend and would always remain so, no matter what happened with the Masters

Essay on Kajira in training .
a kajies in training is much like a child learning what they need to know for thier life only what a kajira learns means life and death for if she is found displeasing the free can end her life..no one said it is easy of that is will be done overnight..many things go into training from the teachings to the lerning it is said the girls best trainer is herself and each lesson learned if a fact of that but there is times that she needs help and she should not be scared to ask for such..there is 4 levels to online silks..black being new..white as learning the basics..yellow as in a better trained silk and last red as a fully trained and opened slave...she would like to say thank You for allowing her to train so she can serve in the city and home of TOR..this is part of a quote she found on serving
"Similarly," I said, "you will learn to serve in whatever position your master dictates and in whatever garb, or lack of garb, he pleases."
"Yes, Master," she said.
"And sometimes, too," I said, "you may have to serve in bonds, even cruel bonds, such things as thongs, and cords and chains."
"Yes, Master," she said. Savages of Gor - Page 187

Both WS assignments one and Two are a Pass well done hun

Assignment 4
Write out a basic serve
[08:24] Tyre: Some sweet child juice please
[08:24] talibahJ: ramberry Juice Master?
[08:24] Tyre: Ai that will do
[08:24] talibahJ: yes Master chilled ramberry juice
[08:27] *talibahJ slips to her fet unfolding slender limps as she rises and move on whispering feet to the kitchen her motions soft and gracefull as inky tresses float down her back against white silks..she slips into the inglufing lights of the kitchen and walks to the shalving where tapered fingers tease a goblet from its resting place..a soft smile on her velvet lips as she takes a cloth and polishes it to a shine..<c>*
[08:30] *talibahJ moves to the cooler she slips inside whimpering as a icycold chill invlopes her like a winter blanket and she hurries to the shelving and hums a soft tune as she lifts the pitcher pouring the sweet juice into the vessel..she hurries back to the warmth of the kitchen purring as the warmth sinks into satin skin..she turns and hurres out to the main room and to the feet of the waiting Master...<c>*
[08:31] *talibahJ she drops to her knees before Him and places a kiss to the side of the goblet and speaks in soft honeyed tones...she offers Master this juice and prays it is pleasing to Him*
[08:31] *talibahJ willowed arms lifts the vessel to Him as she lowers her head inky tresses brush the floor*
[08:33] *Tyre smiles upon the girl and takes the goblet. *

first off hun you misses assignment3 you passed 4 but I expect more detailed and little longer serves

[15:56] GCN Server set topic to:
'[AR] Gor~ NK NC Safe Zone The largest and most populace of the desert city-states of Gor. Located in the far south,
to the northeast of Turia, at the edge of the vast Tahari a small oasis is rght outside wasteland. It is a major
trade center and the focal point of hundreds of desert caravan routes.'
[16:02] *talibahJ moves to the sand of the pit the grain of gold lay against her feet as she makes her way to the
center..eyes of inchanting emerlad lower as she bows her head forwards the soung og the savages pounding in her mind
beating to the heart in her chest the heart that beats for One that lives for One.he herd moves to side to side as
jade eyes flash open she looks for Him seeking Him out but He does not come spinning she calls out for Him for her
Master..*turns as the sounds gets quiet no noise is head as her gaze lays upon Him..her breath catches in
thoat as her gaze settles upon His boots..she can feel His gaze and it sends shivers thru her she knows it is Him
He is the one she needs the one her body desires..He fingers snap and she moves to His feet swiftly sinking to tender
knees before Him her small form trembles as willowed arms reach forth raising towards the gorean skys..slenders wrists
lay over each other to be bound..her heart races deep within her chest as her head bows low treses of
black silk sweeping against the grounds like a blanket of ink..her voice catches nerviously in her as she begs from
the bottom of her very being*
[16:09] talibahJ: Master this slave offers her submission to You and begs Your collar waits with baited breath for
her offer will mean one of two things His collar or His blade on her

Well done its a pass hun

Assinment 3 Pole Dance
POLE DANCE
[07:52] GCN Server set topic to:
'[AR] SafeZone}behind the main hall and You are instantly sourounded by breath taking gardens, tress and flowers that abound, as the scent of fresh flowers greet you and the gently flowing waters of the oasis soothe you leading into a small pool. Benches and walkways placed for relaxing'
[08:01] *talibahJ looks up as she hears then snapping fingers of a Master..her eyes go wide in fear and disbelief as He points at her and then the dance pit..she looks at the pit a deep sinking feeling as slender limbs unfold lifting her to nimble feet not wanting Him to have to repest His command she moves to the pit with grace..as the music starts to plau she closes her eyes wishing she was in another place..she lets the sounds carry her away..*
[08:04] *talibahJ slow feet move her over the golden grains of sand she moves to the pole..silk covered satin skin slides over the side of the pole the woodgrain smooth to the touch slowly she turns around the ploe a soft touch offer to it as her body moves in tune with the growing music she is locked in a trance like state her kajira mind moves as she has been trained for with grace and beauty..her heart races as she spins in slow circles holding to the woodgrain *
[08:07] *talibahJ her head rolls back inky tresses sliding in rythem along her white silks in a bold contrast as she slowly sinks down rocking on her knees ..she presses a soft cheek to the solid frame..her mind and sopul claimed by the music..her hands inbrace the pole lifting has back to her feet as the music drives her to move..her eyes turn to her owner as she falls to her knees the the sound of the music dieing down..*
[08:08] *talibahJ her head lowers raven tresses covering the features of her delicate face as emerlad eyes lower down in respect*
[08:08] talibahJ: la kajira

Well Done Pole Dance a Pass